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hauntedheadnc
10-26-2007, 09:00 PM
Don't ask me why, but even after hearing about all my troubles with my resume, my boyfriend, a child psychologist in Oklahoma, asked me to write a resume for him to help facilitate him making the move from there to here. I'd like some feedback, if anyone cares to take a look.

(Name)
(Address)
(Phone number)
(Fairly professional-sounding email address)

QUALIFICATIONS

• Extensive training and experience in the fields of health and mental health
• Extensive experience working with juvenile clients
• Excellent managerial and organizational skills
• Ability to manage multiple detailed tasks in a high-pressure environment.

PROFESSIONAL SKILLS

MENTAL HEALTHCARE TRAINING AND SKILLS

• Instructed mentally-handicapped clients in basic living skills and job training, enabling them to become functioning members of society.
• Maintained safe, secure environments in group home and juvenile detention settings.
• Supervised clients and organized daily activities.
• Trained in adventure-based counseling.
• Aided juvenile offenders in their transition into society, including overseeing case reviews and tracking court cases.
• Supervised and cared for clients with substance-abuse problems, including updating and maintaining clients’ treatment plans.
• Worked with clients with a variety of special needs in community settings.
• Trained in crisis intervention and safe management intervention.
• Foundations Training certified.
• MOPY certified.

HEALTHCARE TRAINING AND SKILLS

• Certified Nursing Assistant
• Trained as Patient Care Assistant/Operating Room Technician
• Certified in CPR and First Aid

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY

• Rehabilitation Specialist II, Elizabeth Arkham Asylum for the Criminally Insane, Gotham City, NJ
6/07 to Present
• Juvenile Caseworker II, Blackgate Penitentiary, Gotham City, NJ
9/05 – 6/07
• PCA/OR Technician Trainee, Juniper Hill Asylum, Augusta, ME
6/04 – 9/05
• Juvenile Caseworker, Kingdom Hospital, Lewiston, ME
9/02 – 6/04
• Residential Youth Worker II, Alchemilla Hospital, Silent Hill, WV
11/01 – 12/03
• Mental Health Technician I, Brookhaven Hospital, Silent Hill, WV
6/01 – 11/01
• Juvenile Caseworker, Vannacutt Psychiatric Institute, Los Angeles, CA
12/00 – 6/01

EDUCATION

University of California at Sunnydale
Currently pursuing a Bachelor of Science degree in child psychology.
Interning with the Gotham County Juvenile Justice Service, internship complete 12/07.

REFERENCES

References gladly provided upon request

king4aday
10-30-2007, 02:55 AM
To me this looks like a really good resume, the only thing that you might want to consider is an employment objective at the very top of the resume. Now that Im in management and I am hiring employees (fun fun) I always appreciate seeing an objective of why they want the job. I would actually make this very specific to the company. For instance if you want a job at wal-mart (picked because its a big company who everyone knows):

Employment Objective: To secure a position with Wal-Mart, which would have opportunity for growth in the company so I can ultimately be placed in a management position.

From there you go into talking about your work experience and education. I really hope this helps. I have used employment objectives on every resume I have used and it really has helped me in the long run.