The really weird poem song game

[the toy guy]

You didn't mess with the order did you. The poem you got was from in order from 1-20, correct. Because the first few Stanza seem a little too well put together

Of course, taking the lines and reordering them to make more sense would also make for an interesting game.

[Danno]

You didn't mess with the order did you. The poem you got was from in order from 1-20, correct. Because the first few Stanza seem a little too well put together

Ah, yes. I misunderstood "break up the stanzas (verses) as you see fit, see if you can get the poem to flow" to mean "sort the lines into some sort of meaningful order." Actually, that sounded like fun and was the main reason I took the challenge. Sorry, I gotta stop posting so late at night.

[MannersMakethMan]

Hold me close, don't let me go.

Unemployment at a record high

Close your eyes
Saturday night
Ooh ooh ooh Ms Grace

Yeah I, I get to know your name
If you're going to San Francisco

We're no strangers to love
By the rivers of Babylon
When the going gets tough
Ooh, precious moments

Mister, your eyes are full of hesitation
I don't want a perfect love affair
Magic moments

So long boy, you can take my place
If you hate me after all I say

Sugar, ah honey honey

Young girl, get out of my mind

Heaven, I'm in heaven

Hearts gone astray

We're leaving together

[marty]

It's never ganna be normal, you and me

You can be my alphabet and I will be your calculator
So if you're lonely, you know I'm here waiting for you
Monster, monster feeding

Too orthodox, I can't control my feelings
I can't remember 1989
You don't know me

Line up crooked my eyes straight up at the sun
Lips are turning blue
I was staring out the window the whole time he was talking to me
What you did to me made me see myself something different

I'm sitting on a citadel
Change everything you are and everything you were

There's a big beat, you're spinning in my TV
I drew a sound from the belly of the well
Does it go from east to west

There's a spaceman in my basement
One, two boys by the river
Venus was a flytrap, the man you loved devoured
Mother sings a lulluby to her child
Dreamt last night of sirens

[saint]

2 Weeks Away


Nobody else here baby
Yeah, I am the astro-creep
Reluctantly crouched at the starting line

Light a candle for the sinners, set the world on fire
This is sick
You got a body like the devil
Love is a fire
Well she was an american girl

I'm a one way motorway
Some people call me the space cowboy
When I look into your eyes

Brother bought a coconut, bought it for a dime
We chase misprinted lies

Words are flowing out like rain into a paper cup
I just want you close
This time taking it away

I'm the man, I'm the king, I'm the one
You didn't think we could do it again?
I'm going to tell you something you dont want to hear
She'd do anything to sparkle in his eye


1-Dido 2-U2 3- Rob Zombie 4-cake
5-Marilyn manson 6-janet jackson 7-Kid Rock 8-Manson (again) 9-tom petty
10- Foo fighters 11-steve miller band -12 ?
13- harry nillson 14- Alice in chains
15- beatles 16- alicia keys 17 ?
18 Soil- 19 kayne west 20- little goodbyes 21- vanessa carlton

( I miscounted and ended up with 21, but I like the last line, so :P )

[Chazzie]

This looks like fun! Here we go!

Day Late Friend

Write down, to remind yourself on how it can be, how it can be
How does it feel to treat me like you do
The lights go out and I can't be saved
I close my eyes and I smile

Not that you're the one
Ura said there plainly seems to be
I should warn you
Everybody's got a Water Buffalo

Memories consume
Catch me as I fall
Got up early, found something's missing
If you're blue and you don't know where to go to

No sleep
Now time has come to hate
I'm lyin' here on the floor where you left me
Inside-out

Make his fight on the hill in the early day
I am a question to the world
My Soul feels empty
I'm thinking of my soul's sovereignty



Uh, wow. That started out depressing, then went nonsensical, then went nonsensical!depressing.

[hinakiba777]

Ah, yes. I misunderstood "break up the stanzas (verses) as you see fit, see if you can get the poem to flow" to mean "sort the lines into some sort of meaningful order." Actually, that sounded like fun and was the main reason I took the challenge. Sorry, I gotta stop posting so late at night.

It's alright. We still love.

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Do to my addiction to this game I'm going to play again! YAY!

Hey Dad look at me

I came in as the sun came up
Blackbird sing your mournful song
Did you hear? Did you hear?
Well I don't know why I came here tonight

I can't remember when you weren't there
We couldn't stay on the tailgate
When you're the best of friends

When ever I see someone less fortunate than I

The sun is shining
Now that you're out of my life I'm so much better

Dear, Dear Diary I want to tell my secrets
It's Impossible, It's impossible to love you
You always had a way with words
My sister and I had an act that couldn't flop

They say it's a man's world
In the morning when you wake up
My mother said there's only one way
Tell me lies, Slap me on the face
I got no regret right now
When I go to sleep I pray


This turned really dark. I think it's a story about two people going from best friends into an abusive relationship. Though I guess the voice of the poem got out.