My second year in college, I had a guy in my biology class who asked me if I'd look over some of his work.
It was a hell of a fun class. We'd go on field trips for our labs, to places like a wind farm, a nuclear power plant, or just riding around the countryside in the school bus while the professor pointed out different land and soil formations to us. I'd BS with my classmates on the bus and have snacks and sodas and it was about the easiest A I ever got in college. Or we'd go out to the creek behind the building and test the water and look for critters or something. Then we would have to write an essay about what we learned or answer a bunch of questions (for the latter he'd want several complete sentences to answer each question thoroughly).
And here was my classmate turning in about one sentence for each question as his answer. Actually, I take that back. Sentences need a subject, a predicate, a noun and a verb, and many of his answers were missing one or more of those things.
Plus he never seemed to get the hang of when to use a period and when to use a comma.
Granted, this was just community college, but the sad thing is once I left there and moved on to a university, the quality of the writing from some of my classmates didn't get too much better.
It was a hell of a fun class. We'd go on field trips for our labs, to places like a wind farm, a nuclear power plant, or just riding around the countryside in the school bus while the professor pointed out different land and soil formations to us. I'd BS with my classmates on the bus and have snacks and sodas and it was about the easiest A I ever got in college. Or we'd go out to the creek behind the building and test the water and look for critters or something. Then we would have to write an essay about what we learned or answer a bunch of questions (for the latter he'd want several complete sentences to answer each question thoroughly).
And here was my classmate turning in about one sentence for each question as his answer. Actually, I take that back. Sentences need a subject, a predicate, a noun and a verb, and many of his answers were missing one or more of those things.
Plus he never seemed to get the hang of when to use a period and when to use a comma.
Granted, this was just community college, but the sad thing is once I left there and moved on to a university, the quality of the writing from some of my classmates didn't get too much better.
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