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  • Construction critiques of my website please?

    If you saw my most recent post, I decided that I'm going to open my own business. I finally finished my website (I think) and would love to know what you think. Additions, changes, etc.

    https://yourpersistentassistant.com

    Thank you for your help.

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    Quoth Moirae View Post
    If you saw my most recent post, I decided that I'm going to open my own business. I finally finished my website (I think) and would love to know what you think. Additions, changes, etc.

    https://yourpersistentassistant.com

    Thank you for your help.
    Windows 10 machine, Chrome browser. 1920 x 1080 display settings.

    Your site to me seems very clean. The sub-pages seem organized and flow well, at least in my opinion.

    That said, I also think the text on the home page is hard to read. The text that reads "Not enough time in your day" I had to strain to read. That and the line or two below it.

    I think you have too much "above the fold" on your home page before you even get to the information.

    I think I would add the subtle drop-shadow (or whatever that effect is) to your pricing as well. For instance, on your "Virtual Assistance" page, the tasks you do "pop". They container that they're in gives the page some depth, but the pricing below doesn't pop. It's just there. Consider the same on the Web Design page.
    Skilled programmers aren't cheap. Cheap programmers aren't skilled.

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    • #3
      MS10, Firefox. No trouble loading it or anything. It looks well organized but all the white wording blends into the background on the main page. The cursive fonts are extremely hard to read.
      https://www.facebook.com/authorpatriciacorrell/

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      • #4
        Ok, so I spent a while making those things clearer. Thank you guys. That's why another set of eyes is a good thing.

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