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Ok a little background here. I've had 3 or 4 dreams where I was in/watching a music video with original songs. I hardly remember them long enough to ever write down the songs in the dream, or how the music video went. I finally am able to remember MOST of one of the dreams. Now some might think this post should be somewhere else, but I am asking for a little help here. One..making sure that it IS original and I didn't just hear it somewhere and forget about it. Two, IF we have anybody who can write songs to contact me to work on this with me...and Three a little constructive feedback. Grammar (within reason to keep the flow of the song), spelling, etc.
Now keep in mind I can not write music, so it is in the form of a poem, but here is the chorus.
Baby your mine, and I'm always going to stay.
Baby I'm yours, and I'm never going to stray
((From here on out when I say 'chorus' the above repeats))
I know times are tough, baby I hate to see you cry
But we'll make it through, I'll never say goodbye
Chorus
The world is a battlefield, and they have drawn the line
But I know I can not lose, as long as you're mine
Chorus (x2)
((All I remember))
I know that is way too short, and it would need at least one more non-chorus (I know there was one more in the dream, but do not remember it)) Any suggestions would be good.
If anybody knows anybody who can help with music have them contact me to iron out arrangements. ...
Anyhow...now the video .. it was ... crazy *laughs*
The video had many famous people (Gaga, Steven Tyler, all the members of Poison..the Black Eyed Peas, etc.) It would start with one of them on screen, and then through the magic of video others would appear behind them, splitting off, more appearing from behind them, etc. Every time the chorus would be sung it would focus on ONE of them..and the process would start over again with new celebrities...
Yes..my mind she is weird..
Now keep in mind I can not write music, so it is in the form of a poem, but here is the chorus.
Baby your mine, and I'm always going to stay.
Baby I'm yours, and I'm never going to stray
((From here on out when I say 'chorus' the above repeats))
I know times are tough, baby I hate to see you cry
But we'll make it through, I'll never say goodbye
Chorus
The world is a battlefield, and they have drawn the line
But I know I can not lose, as long as you're mine
Chorus (x2)
((All I remember))
I know that is way too short, and it would need at least one more non-chorus (I know there was one more in the dream, but do not remember it)) Any suggestions would be good.
If anybody knows anybody who can help with music have them contact me to iron out arrangements. ...
Anyhow...now the video .. it was ... crazy *laughs*
The video had many famous people (Gaga, Steven Tyler, all the members of Poison..the Black Eyed Peas, etc.) It would start with one of them on screen, and then through the magic of video others would appear behind them, splitting off, more appearing from behind them, etc. Every time the chorus would be sung it would focus on ONE of them..and the process would start over again with new celebrities...
Yes..my mind she is weird..