Sneak Peek At My Newest Video!

[dendawg]

After 3 years of procrastination and frustration, finally I've made progress on a video I've wanted to do forever.

I'm about half done, and I figured maybe you guys would like a sneak peek, so here's a peek at the intro.

When I complete this, I will post the rest, barring the wrath of mod.

Stay Tooned!

Dendawg

[sms001]

Cute. Looking forward to the rest.

[Jay 2K Winger]

Cute indeed, a couple of things, however:

First-- GAAAH, COMIC SANS! Before finalizing your video, I'd recommend changing that font.

Second-- I'm pretty sure they only ALL CAPS'd a name the first time it was mentioned in the opening crawl, and went to Regular Caps thereafter, if you care about such things.

That is all. Looking forward to the rest later.

[dendawg]

I appreciate your honest criticism, Jay2k...I feel the use of Comic Sans is appropriate because my videos are comedic in tone, and the use of that font IMHO symbolizes that. As for the all caps, I'll consider it. Thanks.

[ReadyToRetire]

Not to step on any toes, but a couple things stood out.

1. "with exception of" should be "with the exception of"
2. "Little, however, did they" should be " However, little did they" or "Little did they know, however"

[dendawg]

^Fixed and fixed. *salute*